Post by Ms. Cleo on Jul 11, 2007 4:33:52 GMT
filipino said:
Author's note: This is my old zombie story from the Bio Nightmare forums. I was never really happy with it, so I rewrote some parts, added new things, rearranged some spots, improved on some of the dialogue, and went just a little bit farther from where I left off.This is the FIRST DRAFT of the revision. I may not release the next few incarnations, but I plan to continue my story, which was long in hiatus.
[glow=red,2,300] BIO NIGHTMARE[/glow]
by
Andrew Velasco Rochino
On a cold and gray September morning, a charcoal-colored El Camino pulled up on top of a hill. On both sides of the car were spray painted in red the word "Caiger." There were four people dressed in thick, ragged winter clothing. Two were in the seats, and the other two were riding in the open bed. One of the passengers on truck bed stood up and scanned the misty valley with binoculars after slinging his AK-47 over his shoulder. Through the fog he saw the usual sight of stray zombies lurching around aimlessly. Then he noticed a light in the distance. As he focused on it he realized it was a campfire of some sort. He pounded on the roof of the car, pointing out the direction, and they drove down the hill towards the possible sign of human life.
The vehicle sped through the field, running down any zombie unlucky enough to stray in front of the car's path. The El Camino pulled over in front of some kind of ruin. The old, decrepit building looked like a partially-collapsed barn, and on the second story opening was the campfire they had seen. The white smoke seeped trough the holes in the barn's ceiling.
All of the men, excluding the driver, dismounted the vehicle and readied their weapons. The four didn’t looked like professional soldiers at all. They looked more like a ragtag bunch of resistance fighters you see in the movies, with tattered, worn apparel and old army gear probably salvaged from abandoned forts. The one from the passenger seat, armed with a heavily-scratched Remington 870 12-Guage Shotgun was the first to approach the barn doors. He slowly opened the doors; the new path was accompanied by a loud creak from the hinges. The man had a black balaclava on, along with winter clothes, but despite these warm coverings his breath still shown in the air when he exhaled from the mouth opening of his ski mask.
Victor
He turned on the flashlight connected to the chrome shotgun's forearm grip and had a look in the barn. He cocked the pump, moving the light as he did so. He then signaled to the other two who were standing in front of the car with their Kalashnikovs aimed. They cautiously followed the lead man. The driver stayed behind, keeping the engine running. He looked out the windows of the car and saw that the approaching zombies were still a good ways off, not posing a direct threat at the moment. If a few lurchers happened to get too close for comfort, however, its nothing his trusty Glock Model 18 couldn't handle.
Knowing he could be sitting there, idling, for a good long time while his comrades searched the barn for any signs of life, he turned on the radio and kicked back with a forty of Bud Lite while Metallica’s "Blackened" lulled him to relaxation with its lyrics hinting of slight irony.
The three men each formed a triangle on the bottom floor of the building, in case they would need to defend themselves from hostile forces. The lead man with the Remington called out. There was no response, but movement was heard behind a stack of milk jugs, and the three men aimed their weapons toward the noise.
"Anybody there?" asked the man with a makeshift bayonet on his AK-47 in the form of a kitchen knife duct-taped to the barrel; though still reliable, the blade has obviously seen better days.
There was no response to the inquiry.
"Show yourself!" commanded the man with the Remington as his light focused on the containers, weaving left and right, to and fro, scanning the dark area for any trace of the disturbance.
Hands poked out from behind the stack, then slowly a head, and then finally the rest of her body. Dressed in worn out clothing she kept her hands in the air as the three men lowered their weapons.
"Put your hands down, we're here to help. " reassured one of the men.
The young woman look surprised, and after some hesitation she slowly lowered her arms.
"Then...then why did you enter the barn all quiet-like, like you were here to kill us or something?" she questioned.
"Just thought there might be some zeds in here." came the answer.
"What do you want?" she asked with some fear in her voice, "Our supplies? Our food? Our-"
"No, no, no," interrupted the man with the Remington as he and the other two slung their firearms over their shoulders, "We're from a settlement. A settlement filled with other people. Every so often we go around the countryside looking for survivors to bring home."
As he explained, more people from various areas of the barn began to emerge from their hiding spots.
Outside, the driver rose up from his seat as one of his comrades came out of the barn door. He rolled down the window as his fellow seeker approached the door.
"We got some. About like, I dunno--20." said the man, leaning down.
The driver took the receiver of a ham radio that was on the dashboard and spoke into it.
"Scotty, Scotty. Come in Scotty." he spoke into the radio. After a few seconds of silence he repeated his call.
"Yo yo, wus crackin'?" finally came the response over the radio.
"We found some. ‘Bout 20." The morning sun began to shine through the overcast as Jazz gave their coordinates to Scotty.
"Roger. We'll be there in an hour."
After Jazz hung up, the man outside the car ran into the barn and opened wide the doors. After the car pulled in, they closed the doors just as a few zombies neared. Jazz backed the vehicle up and parked the El Camino in with the rear propped up to the doors to reinforce them. Luckily it was one of those barns where the doors opened inward.
The pounding and groaning intensified as Jazz stepped out of the car, his tall 6'4'' figure towering over the other people in the room.
"They'll be here in an hour, Boss." he informed.
"Alright." the man with the Remington exhaled with a bored clap.
The large group of people were now lounging around the barn, waiting.
For half an hour now, they sat, waiting. The pounding on the walls and door now turned into a deafening symphony of determined bashing, and the chorus of zombie groans, now dozens strong, have frightened the younger children within the group to seek sanctuary in their mother's arms.
"Hey Victor," Jazz called to the one who was outside with him earlier, "You got the time?"
"Nope...Cleon?" he asked the guy who had the AK with the makeshift bayonet.
Cleon rolled up his sleeve and checked his Rolex.
"10:17. Still like got like a half hour." he said.
An incredibly loud bang was then detected at the door. It was more distinct from the others, as it was louder and sounded stronger.
"What was that?" asked a woman in the corner with fear in her voice.
Everyone stared at the door as the bang sounded again.
"Hey Victor, check it out." commanded Boss.
"What?" Victor exclaimed, "Are you crazy? I'm not going out there, its suicide! You might as well tell me-"
“Fuckin’ retard…” interrupted Jazz, "He means go up to the second floor and look out the window.”
Victor gave a slightly embarrassed look of understanding and climbed the ladder to the second floor to poke his head out the window to investigate the disturbance as Jazz shook his head toward Boss.
“Rookies…” Jazz scoffed.
The countless moans pulsated through Victor’s eardrums as he stuck his head out of the second story window. Peering down, he saw a sea of death crashing on the front and sides of the barn, with more and more rotters approaching from all corners of the valley. Leaning against the window sill, he surveyed the scene until he found the source of the threat.
A rather stocky zombie who was obviously a construction worker in life, evident by the torn uniform and hard hat it was wearing, was clumsily wielding a crowbar which it used to periodically pound on the barnyard door. It was having trouble using the weapon because it had little room in the squished crowd.
Victor unholstered his 38.-Special revolver and took careful aim at the zombie. He fired at the zombie’s head, but the shot found itself punctured into the shoulder of a neighboring corpse instead. Victor lined up his gun once again, taking a few more seconds to ensure greater accuracy. After missing once again, the bullet hitting something he didn’t catch with his eyes, the frustrated Victor let out an irritated grunt as he holstered his revolver.
“Goddamnit, I suck…” Victor scolded himself under his breath as he aimed his Kalashnikov.
He fired an unsteady burst at the late construction worker, the second shot penetrating the corpse’s hard hat. That was actually only the second time that Victor fired his AK outside of the shooting range back home. The first was just mere hours ago at the group’s first stop at an abandoned train station, along with two other teams.
The reason the four didn’t perform the obvious tactic of picking off zombies from the second story of the barn to buy themselves some more time was that they were dangerously low on ammo. Their last skirmish at the train station left their supply nearly spent.
Victor remembered that horrifying experience, as it was still fresh in his mind. Back at the station, Victor’s group was unfortunate enough to be selected to investigate the underground storage area. They broke the lock of the inclined wooden double doors and descended into the pitch black basement. The storage room was unusually large for a train station, packed with old, rusted engine equipment, tools, and crates completely engulfed in dusty cobwebs.
With no working illumination beside their electric torches and Boss’s flashlight on the forearm grip of his shotgun, they slowly made their way through the tall shelves, making a round. Victor remembered hearing the first moans, ringing in his ears, sending terrifying chills down his spine. As soon as the Boss got wind of the hostiles, he ordered his men to fall back, but less than halfway the undead emerged, seemingly coming out of the woodwork.
They retreated to a large clearing of the room and stood back to back, facing different directions, holding off the attackers until the other two teams rushed down to rescue them. They never figured out why there were so many of them in the basement of a train station, but Cleon theorized that with the strong lock on the door, they may have been trapped down there on purpose by other people long ago.
All they knew was that the experience left them with almost no more spare ammunition. Boss was down to his last belt of shells, Cleon and Jazz each had less than half a clip to their names, and in Victor’s panic he went wild, spraying the area to a somewhat adequate effect. Despite his fit, Victor was the luckiest of the bunch, still retaining another full clip in addition to the bullets left in his gun, just barely making it into the teens.
With no way to replenish their ammunition, HQ commanded the teams to continue on their patrols, regardless.
Back in the current moment, Victor gave a triumphant chuckle as he rose up. As the rotter dropped, the other zombies in the horde looked up at him and raised their hands in a vain attempt to get him. He spit down at the zombies, who were grabbing at the air towards him. Like the immature kid that he was, Victor began taunting them. After he was satisfied, he chuckled and set his AK on the sill, forgetting that the strap was not around his shoulder.
He gasped as his weapon slipped from its position. Victor dashed his hands to grab his gun, but it fell down below. The strap caught onto a loose piece of wood sticking out of the wall of the barn, some three feet below. Not being able to even bare the thought of having to explain to his teammates how he lost his stupid rifle, he leaned out of the window, trying to reach for the caught Kalashnikov.
His stomach began to hurt as he tilted farther, but he was getting close. He tried his best to ignore that he was literally staring death in the face, as the zombies were stretching up towards him, mere yards away. His AK was just in reach, and he felt himself getting closer.
Suddenly, he was pulled back up to the second floor.
“What the F*CK is wrong with you?!” Cleon demanded as he smacked Victor upside the head.
“What the hell, I almost had it!”
“What’re you talking about, are you on crack or something?!”
Victor directed his attention to his lost weapon. Cleon looked out and let out a disappointed sigh, telling Victor to leave it be.
“It’s not worth it, man.”
With reluctance, Victor followed Cleon down the ladder and returned to the group.
"Got ‘em," he announced, "It was some zed with a crowbar."
"By all the shots we heard you fire, we thought you were trying to take on the entire horde." Jazz snarked as Victor found an upside down bucket near the milk jugs and sat down.
“Uh…” Boss started as he raised his eyebrow. “Where’s your--”
“He dropped it.” Cleon answered promptly.
Boss and Jazz traded a look. Jazz’s expression was a lot meaner than Boss’s, who took on a more professional demeanor.
“Ooooooh, my God…” Jazz sighed, perturbed.
The young Victor stared down his nose as he twiddled his thumbs.
The dust from the walls began to fill the barn as the poundings intensified. More and more people coughed as the time to leave drew near. The corner of the barn started to show signs of collapsing as Boss ordered the group to seek refuge. He, Cleon, and Victor began to barricade the corner with whatever they could find as the zombies outside learned of the weak spot and started to flock to that area to break through. Jazz moved to the El Camino and picked up the radio receiver.
"Scotty, come in, its Jazz. You there?" he hurriedly said with desperation in his voice.
"Yeah?" almost immediately came the reply, "Wassup?"
"I don't know how much longer we can last. The zeds are starting to break through. There's like over a hundred of 'em! You gotta get here quick!" he pleaded.
Remarkably, the zombies now started to pound the wall in unison, effectively increasing their attack.
"We almost there, homey. Hold on. We...we see the barn...aaooow shit! That's a lotta zeds! Hold up man, jus’ hold on. We gon’ be there in like 2 minutes.” he assured. “Good luck. Out.”
"They'll be here in 2 minutes!" Jazz yelled over the zombies. "We just gotta-"
Before he could finish his announcement, the wall gave way and fell inwards. Boss, Cleon, and Victor opened fire as the excited groans filled the barn.
The struggled rumble of mediocrely-maintained engines grew louder as four vehicles approached the overrun barn. A military half track, a military jeep and two transport trucks raced from the horizon at top speed. The old, rusty WWII-era vehicles had the same red spray painted title on their sides as the El Camino.
Jazz ran up beside his three comrades and fired into the approaching tides of death. They were holding back the zombies long enough for the civilians to climb up the ladder to safety. The plan was to delay the horde until all the civilians got up the ladder, then the four fighters would climb up the ladder with them and wait for back-up to arrive.
Blood mists filled the air like smoke as the zombies stumbled closer to the four men. Even with the stressing predicament, the four were surprisingly professional and did not panic as others would by letting loose on fully automatic. Instead they took quick, aimed single shots at the differently-sized zombies.
The four began to fall back as the undead now lurched towards them from mere feet away. Boss took a quick look behind him and saw that all the civilians were off the ground. The last was already halfway up the ladder.
"Okay! Get up that ladder! Move, move!" he yelled over the groans. He reloaded as Victor made his way up. A zombie managed to make his way to the side of Cleon and caught him off guard. As it moved to bite him on the shoulder, he shoved it away as hard as he could into the crowd of zombies, knocking some of them down, but the ones behind them that weren't knocked off their feet stepped over their fallen brethren and drew nearer as Cleon began to ascend. Jazz climbed up after emptying his Glock and Boss followed behind.
Cleon
Boss paused at the foot of the ladder as he heard a distant honking. It was frantic and continuous, as if to get attention. He realized it was the vehicles and gave a small sigh of relief. His rejoice was short-lived, however, as zombies grabbed him from all sides and pulled him to the floor.
The halftrack was ahead of the convoy, going almost 70 m.p.h. As the vehicles neared the infested barn, the gunner on the halftrack opened fire on the crowd of lurchers; the 50-cal. machine gun ripped through the targets like they were paper as the vehicles ran over unlucky zombies.
Limbs and guts littered the area around the breach. The halftrack stopped in front of the hole, the front left wheel running over a rotten head, spilling its contents all over the yellow grass. Eight armed men jumped out from the back while the gunner continued to unload on the remaining zombies. Six of them ran into the breach while the other two stayed behind and helped the gunner and drivers hold off the feral zombies that were attracted by the commotion.
The six armed men rushed into the barn like charging knights, guns blazing. They dropped lurchers shambling by the window. They dropped lurchers standing near the door. They dropped lurchers around the El Camino. They dropped lurchers reaching upwards from the foot of the ladder. Going wild on fully automatic they took out over two dozen zombies before the rotters could even react.
The lead man noticed a couple of zombies near the ladder base fighting over something. It looked to him like a hunk of meat, which should be the left leg of a human being. The lead man raised his Kalashnikov and caught both zombies right above the eye in three aimed shots.
After the barn was cleared the six called out to the survivors. The reply came from Victor at the top of the ladder. One right after the other, they began to descend to the sickening scene below. Gunshots from the vehicles outside were still audible, though they weren't as frequent as before the battle, indicating a sharp drop in approaching ferals.
After all the refugees left the second story, Victor came down, with his comrades no where in sight. Victor approached the lead man of the six with a grim look on his face. The other five were escorting the civilians to the transportation trucks. Victor stopped in front of the lead guy as the man slung his rifle over his shoulder. At first Victor wouldn't make eye contact.
Victor was just a kid. A kid who look's like he just saw something he shouldn't have seen.
"Scotty. Took you guys long enough." he managed to say as he finally stopped staring at the floor.
"...We..saw ‘em feedin’ on a leg," Scotty said, "Is everyone coo‘?" Victor just stared at him, giving no response.
The man understood.
"So, Cleon an’ Jazz, where ’dey at? They alright?"
"Yeah, they're cool."
"And where's the Boss Man?"
The teen didn't answer the question. He turned away.
He diverted Scotty's gaze at the top of the ladder. Cleon and Jazz slowly and carefully came down the ladder, as if they were supporting something. They were helping a bloody mess descend. It was Boss, missing his left leg and bleeding something fierce, but other than that he was okay.
As they got down to the floor, Jazz and Cleon each threw one of Boss's arms over their shoulder and assisted the limping man to the vehicles. On their way out of the barn, Scotty patted Boss on the back and gave the old man a reassuring smile.
Victor and Scotty slowly followed after them.
"So what happened?" the usually upbeat Scotty asked somberly.
"Well...he was the last to go up the ladder."
"As usual. Same ol’ Boss. Always gotta be the hero."
"Yeah. Well, then he got grabbed by the zeds before he could get up, and they pulled him to the floor. We started shooting at the zeds around him until he could break free."
They exited the barn into the sunshine, which was peaking through the clouds. The El Camino was ready to go, engine running with Jazz at the wheel and Cleon at his side.
Victor continued.
"So he rushed up the ladder, but before he could get far they got his right leg and started mutilating it. They got him good, but again we helped him break free and he managed to get up to the second floor. We told him we had to amputate, or the infection would get him. Through his screaming we could make out an agreement. So we gave him a smooth piece of wood to bite down on as Cleon took my machete and cleaved off what was left of his leg. We didn't have any fire to seal the burn so we covered it in clean clothes to hold on the bleeding."
"Sheeyit...fuckin' zeds. Well, he should be in the transport truck with a medic."
Victor got into the bed of the El Camino and sat down. He tilted his head back and closed his eyes as the car drove off. Scotty got in the halftrack and the convoy was on its way.
Through the dying fields of yellow grass and thriving weeds, the El Camino rounded up the convoy from the rear. Victor laid curled up on the truck bed, sleeping while wrapped under a torn blanket. The night was pitch black, but the feral zombies made their presence known. Their groans could be heard through the darkness, even with the roar of all the engines. Cleon was pressing the button on the radio that skipped the tracks on the CD until he found a song he liked. "Green Hell" played softly as he turned to Jazz.
"So what do you think?" Cleon asked.
"What? The song? Yeah its cool."
"No, I mean the Boss. What do you think?"
Jazz stared straight ahead at the rear bumper of the Jeep in front of them, thinking about what answer to give. His habit of driving with a fixed gaze would have been troublesome 15 years ago, before the outbreak, but in this post-apocalyptic world no one gave a damn.
"I...don't know. He seems like he'll pull through. We stopped the bleeding, and I think we got the infection in time."
"That's the thing. What if we didn't?"
Jazz knew that's what he was getting at.
"Then," he said with a sigh, "We kill him."
His answer may have sounded cold, but with good reason. This 35 year-old was forced to kill so many people throughout the years that turned into zombies that he no longer gave putting a bullet through a zombified friend's forehead a second thought. He lived by the most important rule in this land of the dead, which was to kill or be killed. The younger, sensitive Cleon took a more optimistic view, having many of his friends and family still alive to that very day.
"Shit. He can't die. He just can't. The Boss is strong. He’s gonna make it. He’s got to, man."
"And what if he doesn't? Are you gonna put him down if you had to?" Cleon was surprised at the question.
"I...I don't think I could. He taught me everything I know. I wouldn't be living today if it weren't for the Boss."
Years ago, the twenty-something Cleon was rescued from certain death at the hands of a blood-thirsty horde by Boss. Since then Boss taught him how to shoot, how to forage, how to fight, and how to survive. Looking up to Boss as a father figure, Cleon couldn't even think of the possibility of having to kill Boss.
"I wouldn't be able to do it,” He stuttered. “I just wouldn't be able to shoot him."
Jazz gave a disappointed sigh.
"Cleon, we’ve been through this a million times. It was on the test to apply for the CSF for fuck’s sake…‘Once they turn, they aren't…’”
Cleon joined Jazz in simultaneously finishing the motto, word for word.
“‘…The people you know any more. They won't remember you at all. When they see you, all they'll see is a meal.’"
"Alright, I know you know it. You have to live by it.”
“…I don’t know.”